Summary?

Wäre eventuell jemand so lieb und könnte sich jemand meine Zusammenfassung anschauen über die USA beziehungsweise deren Einwohner besonders wegen der Grammatik, also den Tenses und der Word order? Das wäre echt sehr hilfreich, danke! Hier ist der Text dazu:

Meine Zusammenfassung:

The text is about the US and its immigration history. Today it is called a nation of immigrants. But thousands of years ago, only Native Americans lived there. The famous railroad that we know today was built by immigrants from Japan and China who came in the middle of the 19th century. A lot of German people came to the US but some of them left because they were discriminated. When some of them stayed, they started a new life mainly in Pennsylvania but later they decided to start a new life in Wisconsin, Michigan, Minnesota, North and South Dakota, Nebraska and Iowa. Ellis Island is known as a museum in New York today but in the past it was called "The Isle of Tears" because when immigrants wanted to go through, they had to prove their good health and they had to be able to write and read. When they could neither read nor write and didn‘t have a good health, they were sent back home. The people who wanted to immigrate into the US had a lot of problems since, in 1924, the US government passed "The Immigration Act“ and people from poorer countries weren‘t allowed to go to the US. Today, if people want to live in the US, they need a greencard which allows them to live and work in the US. People are given 50000 greencards all around the world each year, so there‘s a chance for everyone to immigrate to the US. 

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Englisch?

Könnte sich eventuell bitte jemand meinen Text durchlesen und auf die Grammatik vor allem schauen? Danke!

,,I had been at school in X before I came to Y and it had been terrible in X. I didn‘t have any friends there because there were a lot of groups which were formed and some of them talked about me. I was left out by my "best friend“ who replaced me by someone else and that is how everything started. All of my classmates were mean to me and even the teachers were against me except my maths teacher. I don‘t know why they did that. Honestly, I was a very shy person, so I only talked to people who I felt comfortable with. I think that was the reason. I found new friends from other classes but as soon as my classmates knew that I had found a new friend, they came to them and told something about me, so I was lonely again. They did that for about 5 times but I still don‘t know what they told about me. I only know that they didn‘t want to talk to me anymore after my classmates had told them something about me. Obviously, it had to be something bad that was the reason for not talking to me. On 1st December 2021, it was even worse the girls of my class came together and they formed a circle in which they talked about my and made prejudices. Yet I still don‘t know what they exactly told about me because I only heard my name for multiple times and while they were talking about me, they often looked at me. Therefore, I decided to ignore them until I would leave this school. It didn‘t matter what they said, I completely ignored them. Of course I couldn‘t ignore my teachers who were also mean to me but at least I didn‘t speak to my classmates. On 31st January 2022, I was finally allowed to leave that school and came to this school where I have been since then.“

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Englisch Argument gut?

Wie findet ihr meine Argumentation. Ich freue mich über eine Bewertung.

Aufgabe: Never mary someone your parents didn't approve of. Do you agree?

Living a life with full of love is maybe one of the most important things in life. Especially then, when you find your biggest love, the person with whom you want to spend the rest of your life. But in many cultures this doesn't work like that. For example in India, the parents get to decide who their child will marry. By that the question arises, if parents should approve a marriage. 

Firstly, a marriage doesn't just happen. If two people want to engage, they think about it. That's also the reason that some couples break up with each other. They realize that love doesn't mean mean the same for them, e.g. they think differently about love. Just like parents do. They come from a different timeline. Oftenly they're 20 to 30 years older than their child which leads to the matter of fact that their mindset is completely different, than their childs. By asking the parents for approve, you will not get a correct answer because you're the only one who knows, what's the best for you and who fits you the most. 

Secondly, as time goes on we get older. By that we have to take responsibility for our choices. In order to do that, we have to choose between things and decide. Marriage is such a choice. If somebody can't decide, wether he/she wants to marry its partner or not, then he has to rethink his/her love life, but asking the parents (or others) is immature because you do not take responsibility. If can't decide, then I'm not ready for marriage. 

To sum up, asking the parents for approval is wrong. It's only you who can make the right decision, who can decide, what's important for him/her and what's not and if she/he is really the right one. 

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Englisch-Leaflet?

Hallo!

Wie findet ihr diesen Leaflet? Die bullet points waren:

  • explain why it is important to protect the environment in your area
  • advise tourists on how to save resources on their holiday
  • encourage tourists to use local products and services

Going green

 

How green is Wildalpen?

Wildalpen may be a small village, but that doesn't mean that it can't do a lot against climate change. With a population of just 450 people, Wildalpen is one of the smallest towns in Austria, but their participation in making our planet greener is huge. This small village contains a lot of forests and sources. That is the reason why Wildalpen's focus is set on water and trees. Nearly every source is protected and is used for local water consumption. Moreover, it is not allowed that trees are cut down, but rather they try to make the forests healthier with more biodiversity.

 

What can I do while I am here?

As a tourist, you can also contribute to making Wildalpen green. You should not throw away your dust in nature and stay in an eco-friendly hotel. If you arrive by train and not by car, you can reduce your carbon emissions too. In your hotel, do not ask for towels to be changed every day and turn off the lights and air conditioning when you leave your room.

 

Why should you go local?

We can protect our environment by using sustainable local resources. It is important to eat at local restaurants that use food grown in the area, to support them and the local farmers who try to be as eco-friendly as possible. On the one hand, this contributes to our local economy. On the other hand, this cuts down on a lot of emissions since the food doesn't need to be transported over long distances.

Enjoy your stay in Wildalpen and help us keep it clean and green for future generations!

 

For further information, visit our website: www.goinggreen.at

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