Ist der Liebesbrief so ok?

Hallo erstmal :) Also wir sind jetzt seit fast zwei Jahren zusammen (jetzt beide 16 Jahre alt) und ich schreibe ihm immer mal wieder so kleine Liebesnachrichten und diesmal hab ich halt eine etwas längere geschrieben und wollte wissen wie ihr sie findet. Es tut mir leid dass es in Englisch ist aber er kann nicht so gut deutsch. Danke schon mal :)

i want you to know that in the last year I've fallen deeply in love with you. there are no words to express the feeling I feel in my heart that you came into my life, and how you make every day you’re with me so special. you are my absolutely everything but you know that <3 You are my best friend, my one true love, my one and only. I love you more today than I did yesterday, and I'll love you more tomorrow than I do today it’s incredible i cant even believe its possible to love you more than i already do but you make the impossible possible <3 Loving you is the only thing that makes life worth living. Day by day, my love for you becomes overwhelming, and I can't handle it when I don't see or even talk to you every day. A day without you in my life is like a day without sunshine, a day without food, or a day without air. I need you when I’m cold to keep me warm; I need you in the rain to keep me dry; I need you in my life to keep me happy. You make me feel wonderful. You give me strength when I just can't carry on and I truly treasure that. Every moment spent together is another one of my dreams coming true. I'm afraid I'll say something to make you forget the feelings you have for me when I bring up stupid things. I'm worried you won‘t want me anymore cause love you with everything I have. I was scared to love you at first, out of fear that you would hurt me, but I did and it’s the best thing I’ve ever done. Now, the only fear I have is waking up and realizing it’s all a dream. You are the most wonderful thing that has ever happened to me. Each moment that you and I spend together is so magical that I catch myself smiling for no reason at all. I thought that I would never find a love that is as strong as ours, cause there were times i never even believed anyone could ever love me i was fat ugly and everybody hated me but then you came along and changed my life :*** Baby, you complete me. You make my life so amazing and my world is a better place to be because of you. You make me feel beautiful. Thank you for giving me so much more than I ever could have wanted. I am so thankful for what we have, and for everything we will have. I could never imagine what it would be like if we were to lose each other. I don't even want to think about it. All I want to think of is you. I hope that message wasn't all too long :P